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Johnny Unusual

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    I would say that I don't find this one too funny, but I think it's technically very well done in terms of clear singing (and a good voice) and music, but I personally don't find much humour beyond the premise. Still, I find this (and a lot of songs like this) are a lot better than the earlier stuff that was just weak sauce. You are trying to work with a premise. I guess my criticism is that I don't feel like the premise is explored very much. People stop and stare and it's weird, but maybe you could explore something beyond that, like take the relationship to a weirder place or, conversely, take it to a normal place that you shouldn't have with an inanimate object. I think there's a solid premise in there, but you need to push outward from the initial idea.

     

    Like the They Might Be Giants sound though.

  11. Posted

    I rather like this one, but it feels like it needs to be more cohesive. It feels like there are three songs with the same theme and same song going on. I like the last part most, which has the best premise (the first 2 thirds seem to say "I'm like this kind of hero" and "I better not do anything") with the idea of "saving the world" doing very small insignificant acts. That said, it's technically a very well done song with great sounds. It definitely doesn't sound half assed or thrown together. Good work.

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    It takes a while for the joke of the song to be apparent, but there's not a lot to it. I kind of like the premise (the idea of the guy's mustache ride offer related to the guy who gets all of the chicks because of his car), but it's not so much a funny song to me as it is a fun song. I do like it though: as a joke song, it doesn't quite work, but I think it's good as just a fun little ditty.

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