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I would say that I don't find this one too funny, but I think it's technically very well done in terms of clear singing (and a good voice) and music, but I personally don't find much humour beyond the premise. Still, I find this (and a lot of songs like this) are a lot better than the earlier stuff that was just weak sauce. You are trying to work with a premise. I guess my criticism is that I don't feel like the premise is explored very much. People stop and stare and it's weird, but maybe you could explore something beyond that, like take the relationship to a weirder place or, conversely, take it to a normal place that you shouldn't have with an inanimate object. I think there's a solid premise in there, but you need to push outward from the initial idea.

 

Like the They Might Be Giants sound though.

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