The Ghost of John Hughes 3 Posted January 13, 2016 [media=''] [/media]Â Â This is my 2nd Opinions Theme submission! I'd be thrilled if they used this! Let me know what you think - I can make adjustments. Is it too long? 3 Share this post Link to post
SeveralCircles 426 Posted January 13, 2016 If you actually want feedback, I'd cut off about the last 10 seconds, and also tune the vocals, as some of the discordant notes are a little jarring. Share this post Link to post
The Ghost of John Hughes 3 Posted January 13, 2016 Oh man, cut Paul out? and tune June?! Â I'm not opposed to that actually haha Share this post Link to post
SeveralCircles 426 Posted January 16, 2016 Yeah I think shorter is always better with this sort of thing. Or virtually any music really. It felt like a natural ending point that it then went past. (at about 20 seconds) Â (I'm only bothering to say this because it's fundamentally good, but could use sharpening up, so I hope it doesn't feel rude.) Share this post Link to post
Wien 401 Posted February 17, 2016 [media=''] [/media]Â Â This is my 2nd Opinions Theme submission! I'd be thrilled if they used this! Let me know what you think - I can make adjustments. Is it too long? Â This one gets my upvote Share this post Link to post
