Your revisions are unquotable unfortunately, but don't worry about it. Here's my commentary free of charge.
Gardening at Night - solid, maybe I've heard it way too many times but has never quite done it for me as much as for some people.
Sitting Still - acceptable alternative, but Laughing just as good and less played. Perfect Circle amazing but not at same level. Nothing wrong with any song on Murmur.
Feeling Gravity's Pull - acceptable alternative (and way devalued by the podcast)
Fall on Me - maybe but I've heard it too many times, can't listen to it with fresh ears any more
Heron House - solid, but never one of my favs
E-Bow - you may be right
Country Feedback / Half a World Away - correction accepted
Don't Sleep / Circus Envy - acceptable alternatives
Sad Professor / Walk Unafraid - I actively dislike both of those, along with most of the record. Walk Unafraid is especially grating and maudlin.
Chorus and The Ring - I used to agree but for me it hasn't stood the test of time. After not loving Up I was initially very psyched by Reveal as a return to form, but it wasn't.
Boy in the Well - I guess it's ok, but Aftermath is the only track on the record I ever choose to listen to, and even then not so much.
Man Sized Wreath - Disqualified by annoying "dance floor" line
Hollow Man - first half of chorus is super catchy, but not enough there over all.
Marlon Brando - acceptable alternative, I almost chose that one.
All the Best - very good but marred but just ok lyrics - "show the kids" line is annoying. I feel like even as REM came back strong in the last two albums, the lyrics were only sometimes up to par. E.g., Discoverer almost a great song, but I dislike the "finesse / mess" part.